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Betrothed To The Mafia Lord

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“Don’t make me repeat myself twice, part those legs for me, Bunny.” His deep voice which always sends my brain reeling due to how silky it sounds, washed over me slowly as he murmured quietly against my throat. I tried to point out to him that there was no way I’d be able to do as told with his legs still pinning mine down, but the words died down in my throat when he s*ck*d the skin over my beating pulse into his mouth. “Go on. You want to be good for me, don’t you?” “I— I do.” I choked out, letting out a breathy whimper when he wrapped his free hand around my throat and squeezed on it a little. ——— Forced to marry the ruthless mafia lord, whom everyone was afraid of at the age of eighteen, Sofia had no other choice but to follow her father’s wishes like a dutiful daughter was supposed to. While Luca Ricci only took a wife, because he wasn’t getting any younger at the age of thirty-three. She was the angel to his demons, the light to his darkness, the innocence to his sins… He wanted to protect her, since the moment he locked eyes with hers on their wedding day and saw the amount of fright brewing in it. He wanted to make her good for him, to mark her as his; with his handprints on her *ss and his c*m dripping off her face. To own her completely, to wrap his hand around her throat and do so many sinful things to her body. But he was the mafia lord, and danger just seems to be lurking around him, wherever he goes, and in whatever he does. He must protect his wife at all costs.

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"Betrothed to the Mafia Lord" has an interesting idea, but it falls short in several ways. First, the plot is very slow. The story takes a long time to develop, making it boring at times. Instead of keeping the reader excited, the slow pace can make them lose interest. Luca, the main character, is supposed to be a brutal mafia lord. However, he seems quite nice, which doesn't fit his role. This makes it hard to believe that he's a powerful and feared leader in the mafia. The characters are also unevenly developed. Luca isn't shown as very smart, which is strange given his position. On the other hand, James is portrayed as extremely clever. This imbalance doesn't make sense and feels forced. Some chapters, especially those about Luca's work, are too detailed and become boring. These parts could be written shorter to keep the reader's attention.

July 2, 2024
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