The Ruthless Alpha And His Slave Mate Reviews

Interesting novel...this alpha is a pigheaded narcissistic asshole can't see what he had in front of him all along .it's a really great story although there are a lot of glitches in the story.i hope he sees what he has done she spoke otherwise no person deserves to be treated like that at all she mumbled.lomg story short just make her the Luna ffs.annoying as it seems he would rather torcher his pack and her until it clicks in his low self esteemed mind.

The book has recently changed a lot and is not as exciting to read anymore. The author switched writing styles and makes the book confusing and often repeats happenings. I will not lie it is a good book but I would like to see the author change their writing style back to the way they used to write and continue the story. Even though the book has changed so much I would still like to know how it ends and will keep reading. ☺️☺️

Most chapters repeat the same statement over and over again. I am assuming it is to drag the story out. It makes me loose Intreat in this story and debating on finishing it. So far it’s not had the best story line and the repeating of the story in most chapters makes it hard to purchase the next chapter. If it doesn’t make some improvements in the next chapter I will delete it… so far it’s not been the best

When I start to read the novel I’m excited to discover how will the alpha and the slave find their love. This novel was terribly written. Paragraphs have been repeated to lengthen the story. The author was not able to convey the story in a more comprehensive manner. There are a lot of typographical errors and grammatical mistakes. The plot is jumping from one topic to another that is not even entirely connected. I am of the opinion that the book did not undergo editing as some characters were incorrectly used in a certain part of the story. I didn’t enjoy reading this.

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This Novel starts off slow but picks up. She is a slave but finds out she is the Alpha mate. He wants nothing to do with her because she is a slave & rejects her. Well the fates keep bringing them together but something always blocks her path. She has to deal with the alpha’s last mistress who is a thorn on her side. Candice gives her a necklace but she should have refused it! She is accused of theft & thrown I. The dungeon. Candice warned her she was going to make her life hell & she does.

It's a nice book with so many Twist and turns. I can't wait to get to the end. The book is unique and intriguing . I love it so much. I can't wait to complete it complete it. Hope Damian and Tessa end up together and have cute babies

This story is great just so much bad luck for them both, the story has kept me interested but it is taking so long for him to realize that she is the one and to drop his stupidity about her being a slave. I was hoping she rejected him to make him understand that he needs her but he is just all over the place not knowing what to do about his fate, just love on her already please and go get her back

The book has a great storyline, but they mix the names and words up a lot so it causes confusion. Just needs proofreading before they post the chapters. Also, later on in the chapters, they seem to space the paragraphs out a lot. I don’t know if that is to shorten the chapters or what the case may be I’m not sure we’re really excited to see what happens next really hoping she gets the life that she deserves

I am an hit or miss when it comes to this novel. Some of the writing is decent and at other times it can be everywhere. Some of the stuff is repeated multiple times throughout the chapter. I kind of don’t want to keep spending coins on this book. I’m debating whether to actually finish this book. It honestly kind of feels like a child wrote this book kind of. Read at your own discretion you may or may not like it