Nyx's Will Reviews

If this book had been proof read first before publishing it on here it would have been a really great book. The story so far is really interesting between Kane and Ayanna. Running from being forced to be a Alpha's mate but having no say in who that mate will be. Being on the run for 5 years but always having to look over her shoulder at every turn. Living on your nerves and instincts. Then you help a stranger, only to find out he is from the species you were told to stay away from as they are evil,....or so you were led to believe. Then finding out your real life mate is this stranger. Ayanna gets to comfortable with Kane and realises a little to late the consequences of her actions.

Hittills tycker jag historien är väldigt bra och väntar med spänning på fortsättningen! Många snabba vändningar och i alla fall svårt att förutse i alla fall vad som ska hända här näst. Men i många fall följer den fortfarande samma mönster som många kärlekshistorier. Får se hur den blir ju fler kapitel som kommer. Be kan se lika samma borde hata älska dig och det vi kommit överens om. I samarbete mellan de olika delarna av landet och det vi kommit

Well I started this book awhile back, and have been waiting. I have been trying to go through my books that say updating saddly there are 13 and no not from this author only 1 lol I am loving the story line and can't wait for the rest. There where some typos but not to bad. Keep up the good work the book is great can't wait for the last 5 chapter's or more ( me hinting) I know you want to give it a good ending, it will come to you. But please tell me the mother gets what's coming to her and Maliki and the councle lol hugs and yes it needs to be epic in some way lol

I cannot wait for there to be more! I really hope that is not how the book ends 😭 This is one of the best books I've read with how it explains a different dimension of another world, how each mystical is raised, and how they realize that what their parents taught is lies, to finding out the truth and how life really should be. The characters are highly complex and loveable! I seriously hope there is more to Nyx's Will🥺 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

It's a great novel but it just ends with no conclusion the characters are great. Story is well thought out but could use a spell check now and then. But the way it cut off at the end is really infuriating. I didn't end even a little bit of the story. I mean who does a cliffhanger in a novel. That just frustrates the reader to no end. I don't know why you would publish a novel that does that to your readers.

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This was very creative and well written. The characters were easy to like and hate! I am not sure if the story is actually ended, or if chapters are still being added. I am hoping there is more to come as it seemed like there should be much more to come. I guess I am new to this app and I am unsure if it is one that publishes full books, or partial books as the author continues to work on it. Hopefully I will get a notification that more chapters are done, because I definitely want to see how it ends!

Love this so far, but it's the 4 book I've come across that's not complete! Love the storyline, plot twists are thought out. Character development is pretty good. At least this writer can keep names and their spellings straight, which for me is a huge plus!!! Hopefully more chapters are posted so I can finish this awsome story! Note to the author.....please proof read and actually put the words in where they belong instead of missing a few words here and there in your sentences. Love it!!!

This is a good short story novel. I like the twists and turns, it shows the author creative side. I cant wait to finish reading the entire story. I hope that crazied alpha someone kills him. He is too evil and makes her life miserable. I dont know if I would have had another child with him. I get upset at the mistreatment of he by her parents and her is nothing she can do to stop it, she feels helpless.

Don't let the complicated forward scare you off, this story flows like water, from places to characters all seamlessly evolving. The main characters using magic in unique ways, more harry potter than lord of the rings although tree spirits were a nice touch... wicked real mother, seems like a disney villain. Use of royalty from 3 separate species joining together with the promise to overthrow corruption and bring peace after centuries of war... can't wait to get to the end